Dream About Future Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Dream About Future

Rating: 3.0


Cool moon
Sun in noon
Gives joy
In different mood to enjoy

Who says?
Nature stays
Away from human being
But works for happiness to bring

Open air
Wind to flow fair
Breeze to lie in open
Just write something about them

It is in abundance
Plenty to feel at once
Just open window
Let free air to blow

Body may relax
May bring shine on face
Fresh blood may rush
For new waves to push

It is how we run after
And think about worldly pleasure
Even though nothing is sure
But you may dream about future

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Cool moon Sun in noon Gives joy In different mood to enjoy

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Arnav Gogoi 21 August 2013

Even though nothing is sure...good expression...the uncertainty of everything, events related to our life, is nicely reflected in this line....But still, even after having knowledge of this uncertainty, we also have the pleasure of dreaming about the future...the two entities-good and bad clearly comes into play in the last two lines...good job..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2013

Mr.T.Ganapathy V.Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2013

gianender kumar very beautiful ji

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2013

surekha. parikh very nice sir

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2013

P() () j@, .....so nice...........

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

nice Chris Cowan10 minutes ago interesting and introspective

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