Dream Of Immortality Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Dream Of Immortality

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Dream of immortality
Sunday,28th July 2019

Who shall survive?
and revive
the resolve
to solve the death menace

who can counter?
and offer
an explanation
for the remedy to devastation?

man dies a thousand deaths
and fails to take an easy breath
with no hope to live peacefully
andmake life fully responsible

the poets are full of enthusiasm
and work towards humanism
where death threat is taken lightly
by the propagation of theme rightly

since life and death is reality
no one can dream of immortality
but we do leave behind the name
that is immortal and earns the fame

Hasmukh Mehta

Dream Of Immortality
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Healthy Reminder 28 July 2019

Remember it..I am an academic poet! This is just a website? If people like you are not getting corrected, I will seriously trouble you even sitting outside! Don't dare to evaluate me as a poet....you are not competent enough to judge poet and poetry! What you call numbers are useless ones! I evaluate your standard from those idiotic and meaningless comments. Try get your name making it a paradise not a! I will still it

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how can you be called academic poet when you have no tolerance of brilliant poet. keep your head down and search an answer from the soul

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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