Saturday, January 31, 2009

Dream Of The Man Comments

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half-closed eyelids are heavy
fixed to eyes
dream is waiting
for the material fatigue
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Dagmara Anna 19 February 2009

Fine metaphors, is playing with words. Poem for 'thinking'.

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Hazem Al Jaber 11 February 2009

the most lovely happiness which we all waiting is a dream especialy if that whom we dream about is not around, , not sharing a warm moment together, , so we go always tio wait a dream, to come and to give a happiness, great one dear poet.. hazem al..

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 February 2009

This is a poem I do not understand. I do not know its meraning. DREAM OF THE MAN is not vague in itself. But in its used context here, I cannot connect it to a clear thought. This is unfortunate, because I believe something is contained in these words waiting to escape. GW62

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