Dream [s]t[r]eam - Version Of Dream Team Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Dream [s]t[r]eam - Version Of Dream Team

Rating: 5.0


Two love life when s[tr]ung soul song
tunes violin to bow
strings tau[gh]t as fingers dance along,
share every note we know,
when themes and dreams find fusion,
when echo, origin,
spin round without confusion,
beg in egging begin.

Two love when new dimensions
are crossed, no visa stamped,
unknown are apprehensions,
enthusiasm cramped,
for all through all flows freely,
from alpha to omega
flows back again, ideally
Orion links to Vega.

Two love life's interactions
when harmony lifts cloud,
no pettiness, reactions
too hasty or too loud,
no room for contradictions
restrictions, arguments,
all rosy seems, convictions
shared at no-one's expense.

Two live love undivided
by limits, space or time,
no choice appears one-sided,
one melody sublime,
rich in itself, love tender
needs little else beside.
Two find true faith's defender
in partner must abide.

Two love life's daily dealings
when shared by hearts at ease,
no masks and no concealings,
as all is aimed to please,
when motivations coincide
as each from each learns much,
no wishy-washy track well tried
but two who keep in touch.

Two live love's finest feelings,
as gift uplifting, frame
on which to paint bright ceilings,
kaleidoscopic flame
whose steadfast light flamboyant
turns moment to decades,
whose motivations buoyant
scorn artifice, charades.

Two live love when each wing strong
from inside may emerge
no short, no long as both belong
when kindred spirits merge
completing twin gestation,
as hibernation’s cave
swings open, hesitation
wane’s with vibration’s wave.

Two love life when caresses
the inner skin excite,
beyond what one addresses
unto the outer sight,
when multi-mode summation
lifts life to ecstasy
extending stimulation
much more than touch may see.

Two live love, each confesses,
when morn's born from the night,
when night from morn expresses
what words can't picture quite.
No need for gold or Moses,
no need to phagocyte,
no need where love proposes
osmosis, shared delight.

Two love life, limits scorning,
advance with confidence,
with new ideas a-dawning,
no sitting on the fence,
no hesitations darken
horizons free from mist,
where each to each will hearken,
no novel course dismissed.

Two live love's crowning glory
as causes complement
effects' ongoing story,
no need for compliments
where innate understanding
is daily reinforced,
no wheedling, no demanding,
no doubts and no remorse.

Two love life reading through to
see letters coalesce,
no soar, no sink, skies blue, you
is eyed US to express.
A muse deserves more roses,
which through true glance won't wilt,
it is - or one supposes -
stream endless, can't be spilt.

Rhyme's flow could grow for ever,
theme's stream from mirage free,
no frontiers whatsoever
when one to one can key,
no stanzas neat and clever
can sketch such harmony,
oasis none can sever,
spellbound eternity.

(18 November 2006 and 3 February 2010)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
12 April 2005 Dream Team revised 18 November 2006 and 3 February 2010 for initial version itself revised May 4 2013 see below
I am the finger you are the ring

We love it when the string song
tunes violin to bow
strings tau[gh]t as fingers dance along ~
share every note we know.

We love it when each wing strong
from inside may emerge, -
no short, no long as both belong
when kindred spirits merge.

We love it when caresses
the inner skin excite,
beyond what one addresses
unto the outer sight.

We love it, each confesses,
when morn's born from the night,
when night from morn expresses
what words can't picture quite.

No need for gold or Moses,
no need to phagocyte,
no need when love proposes
osmosis, shared delight.

Princess deserves more roses,
which through her glance shan't wilt,
it is, or one supposes,
stream endless, can't be spilt.

We love when reading through you
the letters coalesce,
no soar, no sink, skies blue to
forever love express.

The ring IS the finger

(12 April 2005)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success