Dream When Expends Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Dream When Expends

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DREAM WHEN EXPENDS

never yet lost in knowing the universe
sea when recedes back as ebbing the tide
change comes even by the paints
colors when smudged over walls ubiquities

dreams when true rain still tears
smiles when blue blood starts to ripple
glow when exotic exalts the motion in wave
hours and days when descends even by the spells

eyes when twinkle love yet jingles
breath when intense world never knows
current entreats the lips to swell upon
as the mighty warriors still defeats in blow

belief when strong rocks the reasons
to dissolve the bickerings by the puddle
heart when twitched softness attunes to bloom
yet it cries by the pain in quest of hopes
dream when expends to clone the faith by the bliss

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 30 March 2008

heart when twitched softness attunes to bloom yet it cries by the pain in quest of hopes yes I agree that dreams make a wonderful changes in life… simile with the ebbing sea is striking as the dreams also explore the limits of universe…like as the line says belief when strong rocks the reasons… so are Dreams., our faith in them makes them come true…

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Tsira Goge 17 March 2008

Beauteous displaing of feeling.... Sincereli...Tsira

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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