Dream On The Milieu Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Dream On The Milieu

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As we dream across the youth
upon the milieu of sands
the love and smiles
may be rippling on the sea.

as we breath betiding
blending the love upon the milieu of time
we conquer the dream
Braced up by the grin and grace.

When the winds of time
Blows away the sands from the milieu
Love is slowly lost to the dream.
and the sands of love subsumed
on the milieu of time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emancipation Planz 13 October 2007

As promised... I know these sands well and whether dried by desert or wet by sea, ... love and smiles to you... One Peace at a Time, Deana

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Ben Gieske 12 October 2007

Beautiful short commentary on life. I like the comparisons and images. Should we build our lives on dreams rather than sand? I know: love and smiles but they are not like rock.

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Ewigi Liebe 05 October 2007

the difference between love and faith is one's motive.someone loving by faith, however chooses to love, motive in spite of feelings, need to discover how to love consistently in this way towards each other, find hardly...but remain in dreams. excellent work doc, Mary :)

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Sandra Fowler 03 October 2007

Very eloquent. I felt nostalgic as I read your flowing lines. Time will have us all, but the dream still has the power to remain in the landscapes of the mind. Excellent.Dr.Kar. Warm regards, Sandra

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Kee Thampi 03 October 2007

so you love to dream it.... Love is slowly lost to the dream.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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