Dreaming Fate Poem by Monisoi Humes

Dreaming Fate

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Lost in the waves of the ocean,
Heavenly skies, flowing with the motion
Baby blue, pure white skies
Nothing fancies thee more than when the skies turn dark,
Pretty sparkles, gleamy Hollywood, bright stars
Bold freedom has thee escaping into the way
Paved with gold
Mansions inside of mansions.

A full life course of pre-meditated fate
Destiny waiving a superior wand
Captain of the world, kingdom come
Born to a seed of the free man
Trapped in an identity of an ancestor
Enlightened by the light that shines through bravery

Hope is a home
Happiness in our smile
Peace lays down at the end of the enormous frequency
Eternity in the eyes, wondering if this is real, or are we all just dreaming?

Dreaming Fate
Friday, December 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,skies,stars
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The spirit of meaning and freedom.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2017

Hope is a home Happiness in our smile. eternity in the eyes.. wondering whether all this is true. thinking, imagining, dreaming, realities of life .. in the world of the stars and skies.. beautiful poem dear poetess. thank you very much. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Monisoi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2017

A marvelous piece Enjoyed the beautiful poetic expression Thanks for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 15 December 2017

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Monisoi.

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