Dreams Poem by Ishita Mehta

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Dreams,
They are just stories my mind narrates,
Keeping me entertained,
As i'm asleep, unconcious
Still unaware,
Of what my mind will tell me today.
Even the best can be the worst
'Cause they won't last, they'll be lost'.

Maybe, not even remebered,
Few days along the axis of time.
Of course, the power is inestimiable,
Speech of mind is remarkable.
Sometimes we wonder,
What did that dream mean? Ponder.
Signals my own mind is sending my form.
Attempting to re-coordinate at dawn,
It's absolute freedom of speech,
Either entirely personel or somewhat bleak.

Even though most are lies, just lies,
Attraction rests in indefinite.
Are'nt some things are just better untold,
Like private thoughts mind unfolds?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 01 May 2009

your poems are certainly giving me some WOW moments. This is absolutely stunning and beautiful. excellent-est work

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Prachi Malik 08 April 2009

very well written.........n u have beautifuky expained the importance of ouur dreams.............a 10/10 for sure...........

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Sameer Ahmed 04 April 2009

Truely elaborated the value of dreams. Infact dreams can reveal sometimes positive attitude towards and sometimes even negative leaving behind worries..............And some still remain ambiguous..............excellent poem...................10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Vimalkumar N 31 March 2009

another master piece...

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 30 March 2009

so nice written ishita.well expressed and loving......verymuch truth inside and true love...keep writing

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Taanya Khanna 03 April 2012

Amazing! I enjoyed reading it.

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Dulakshi Wakista 25 February 2010

Nice beautiful flow write.Well done.Keep on writing.

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Rafique Farooqi 16 July 2009

Beautiful write......well 10+++++++++ done

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Saadat Tahir 08 July 2009

ishita...vry nice dreams are but dr4eams...but poets also partly dwell there...a very nice longing poem may all ur dreams bring u happiness cheers

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