when we look at the sky
we dream of touching the stars
our imagination makes them so near......
but the bitter fact we know well
it is an impossible dream
when we look at the sea
we dream of crossing it
our will pushes us forward......
a massive wave can too
it is a battle of pain
between dreams and facts
between our hopes and our deeds
between reason and passion
between be and non
nice poem. deep and meaningful.jolts us from our imaginations and fantasies into reality
Hi Nabil - This is a lovely evocative poem - straight from you heart. I love it and score it a MAX. In some respects life is 'A Battle of Pain' (line 10) . The SKY and the SEA are metaphors foe the extent of our imagination and our ambition. We all live on lines betwen 'Dreams and Facts' Reason and Passion' 'Existence and Negativity' which is waht makes life so interesting. This poem gives all much to think about. Love in Poetry - JOHN
Commendable wok, young lady.The piece exhibits mellifluous movement throughout...There is much to say about the theme you chose to pen on.Open upm your Minds-Eye & explore imagery & pictorial depiction.You have a solid foundation under you....that (imo) is beckoning for expoundment & creative freedom...Let loose! Also, Line 8...is that reading the way you wanted it to...looks like a wrd may be missing...Our? ? ...Overall, good work, Hana. F j R
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Hanaaart, This poem reveals the truth of the continuous struggle in our life. Lovely composition. I invite you to read my poems and send your comments. You can try this one: Truth of Creation What will be the future Of the nation If the people keep their attention Towards only one direction If only a wheel is cared The other wheel is punctured And the chariot Of the country Will go in the dust ........................ ................... I'm waiting for your reply. Thanks!