Hanaaart Nabil Rashed

Dreams Of Life

when we look at the sky
we dream of touching the stars
our imagination makes them so near......
but the bitter fact we know well
it is an impossible dream

when we look at the sea
we dream of crossing it
our will pushes us forward......
a massive wave can too

it is a battle of pain
between dreams and facts
between our hopes and our deeds
between reason and passion
between be and non

Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 4, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, October 10, 2009

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Comments about Dreams Of Life by Hanaaart Nabil Rashed

  • V P MahurV P Mahur (3/16/2014 9:02:00 AM)

    Dear Hanaaart,
    This poem reveals the truth of the continuous struggle in our life. Lovely composition.

    I invite you to read my poems and send your comments. You can try this one:

    Truth of Creation
    What will be the future
    Of the nation
    If the people keep their attention
    Towards only one direction
    If only a wheel is cared
    The other wheel is punctured
    And the chariot
    Of the country
    Will go in the dust
    I'm waiting for your reply.

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  • Uchenna Nnodum (1/16/2010 1:07:00 PM)

    nice poem. deep and meaningful.jolts us from our imaginations and fantasies into reality

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  • John KnightJohn Knight (10/10/2009 7:53:00 AM)

    Hi Nabil - This is a lovely evocative poem - straight from you heart. I love it and score it a MAX. In some respects life is 'A Battle of Pain' (line 10) . The SKY and the SEA are metaphors foe the extent of our imagination and our ambition. We all live on lines betwen 'Dreams and Facts' Reason and Passion' 'Existence and Negativity' which is waht makes life so interesting. This poem gives all much to think about. Love in Poetry - JOHN

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/6/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    Commendable wok, young lady.The piece exhibits mellifluous movement throughout...There is much to say about the theme you chose to pen on.Open
    upm your Minds-Eye & explore imagery & pictorial depiction.You have a solid foundation under you....that (imo) is beckoning for expoundment & creative freedom...Let loose! Also, Line 8...is that reading the way you wanted it to...looks like a wrd may be missing...Our? ? ...Overall, good work, Hana.

    F j R

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