David Wood

Gold Star - 13,745 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

Dreams (Tanka) - Poem by David Wood

If only I could
Capture your beautiful smile
Wrap it with a bow
Put it under my pillow
To always live in my dreams

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams, love

Form: Tanka

Comments about Dreams (Tanka) by David Wood

  • Valsa George (9/13/2015 1:25:00 AM)

    Excellent Tanka! Enjoyed it thoroughly, David! (Report) Reply

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  • Daniel Brick (9/11/2015 9:45:00 PM)

    Wow! This is a love poem, pure and simple. You withdraw almost completely and let the poem lavish its attention on the beloved. She does not have to appear in the flesh, so to speak, because her presence fills the whole space of the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 11, 2015

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