If only I could
Capture your beautiful smile
Wrap it with a bow
Put it under my pillow
To always live in my dreams
Wow! This is a love poem, pure and simple. You withdraw almost completely and let the poem lavish its attention on the beloved. She does not have to appear in the flesh, so to speak, because her presence fills the whole space of the poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent Tanka! Enjoyed it thoroughly, David!