Mirror Poem by David Wood
Mirror
I am your faithful friend, I cannot lie
My silver charm waits upon your desire
As I stand and wait patiently for you.
You look at me, through me, as if, as if.
As if you wanted to look younger,
Sleeker, slimmer. You gaze and gaze.
You never talk to me but I look back at you
Without wondering, without comment
And I am truthful; I am your faithful friend.
I cannot lie or be unfaithful but when you
Look at me you are unhappy with what
You see. You are critical and sigh.
I will always be here for you, waiting.
My silver charm just a reflection
Waiting to make your day seem happy.
through me, as if, as if. As if you wanted three times older 2013 version may lke to minimise if it does you please
It's very beautiful sir. I would have loved it if a rhyme scheme was part of it like the 'Ballade of Modest Confession' by Hilaire Belloc. Good work though
This poignant poem captures the essence of a mirror's perspective, symbolizing a faithful friend.
Thanks for taking a deep look into the mirror. Quite the reflection! ! 5*****
I will always be here for you, waiting. My silver charm just a reflection Waiting to make your day seem happy.-----We often look into the mirror for reassurance.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2024 10:10:48 PM # 1.0.0
I am tuthful and I can't lie.... this candid expression laudably articulates the personality of the poet. A very nice work... loved it.5 stars