As if awoken from a deep sleep;
I feel a deep liking for you
I sit and gaze at stars so blue;
And I feel I can breathe through you
Can close my eyes in silence too,
And I think I'm in love with you
I pick up a red rose
And I sit there and I gaze;
Drowning in it with a smile on my face
Feel feather-light kisses of wine on my head
Perhaps remembring the things that you said
And something in my breath,
Something in my heart-beat;
Saying I love you in tumbling repeat
I sit in corners and gaze at things;
See smiling people and birds with wings
I sit for hours and gaze at flowers;
The world fills up with magic powers
And feelings touching me with pure caresses,
I look at the enchantment the evening dresses
And as if awoken from a deep sleep;
I feel a deep liking for you
I sit and gaze at stars so blue;
And I feel I can breathe through you
Can close my eyes in silence too,
And I think I'm in love with you
beautiful poem... feelings in nice flow.. needs more integrity..but overall its a good one..9/10..
A nice poetic imagination, Ankita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Dear Ankita, you have a rare ability to put your emotions in a picturesqe way. very nice liked it vry much. thank u for sharing.. would like to get ur comments on my poems. thank u
so soft like a breeze. this poem caresses the reader. 'As if awoken from a deep sleep; I feel a deep liking for you' loved it. thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem describing the power of love, keep it up