Drifting Away Poem by Loide V Augustinus

Drifting Away

Rating: 3.3


Whenever life seems to drift you away from me, I can't help but cry. You've grown to be such a part of me that without you life is no more than a desperate sigh. They do say love comes and goes, and to that I disagree. So, here's my hand, take it and don't let go of me, Multiply it by infinity, take it to the depths of forever and you'll still only have a glimpse of how much I love you, would rather have one smell of your hair or one touch of your hand than an eternity without it.' give you all my love because I truly love you, but I can't give you my soul and my heart because you'll just break it apart, I don't fear insects or spiders. At great heights, I jump off, smiling. In the face of death I wink. But, when I look into your eyes, I'm in fear of how much I love you, Why do I love you? Because you are and always have been my dream. chose to love you in silence, for in silence I find no rejection. I chose to love you in your loneliness, for in your loneliness no one owns you, but me, In your love I am the hero, the king, the poet; and alive without your love, I am nothing at all, not even truly alive.It takes a second to say I love you, but a lifetime to show it, For me, you are the king, the rest is just the rest.'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Well its about two people in love but at a distance.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 16 September 2014

I chose to love you in silence, for in silence I find no rejection. I chose to love you in your loneliness, for in your loneliness no one owns you, but me, .... It takes a second to say I love you, but a lifetime to show it, - Loved these heartfelt expressions. Amazing words to express the innermost feelings!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 September 2014

Nice one with philosophical touch but is it a poem? thank you

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