~drifting Embers~ Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

How embers deep in glow, pale
As my love for you now burns,
How the sky so vast yet constrains
As my love for you grows...

How oceans though deep and wide
cannot contain this overflow,
For love fleeting as last shooting star
burns unlike any fire in me.

3-18-06-
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How embers deep in glow, now pale
As my love for you subsides
And the sky so vast, yet constrains
As my yearning for freedom grows...

The oceans, though deep and wide
cannot contain this overflow,
For love, fleeting as last shooting star
dies like a flame in me.

(I decided to revise this with a slightly different spin)
7-22-11