chasing with the wind is not but gone
life as we have is not but a passing
scene in our own very eyes
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deep thought here and the transient nature of life, , this gift of life we sure pass on to others, , as pure as possible, , ,10
'nothing new to us, what we receive is ours to give it to the one who shared'... dropping the nothing...good concept...the lines quoted are marvelously rich in their content...well done, Anto 10
I am glade I dropped everything to read this when I saw you posted it, and it seems it was worth it...
A very well constructed poem Antonio, it was a pleasure to read, 10 Lynda x