Drowned Poem by Hannah Elizabeth Barton

Drowned

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I'm tired
Drowning in the pain
I'm tired
Help me stay afloat
I'm tired
I always help you
I'm tired
Someone help me
I'm tired
You didn't help me
I'm drowning
I still helped you
The ones at my grave
Were far and very few.

Saturday, July 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: helplessness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Hannah. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 July 2017

help me to stay afloat. drowning am i.. pray..... find consolation and guidance in God Almighty. God is alive. when all human beings go away from us....... God gives us courage to go on and we are sure to win if God is with us. the present situation will change. thank you for this poem. dear poetess. tony

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