Tuesday, August 25, 2015

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Stirring the pot,
On a flame kept hot...
Makes an interesting taste,
For those who like their lives...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Kim Barney 25 August 2015

Entertaining poem, Lawrence. A couple of typos you might want to fix: Line 12. HE prefers instead of HER prefers Line 22: flaunt HIS ego instead of flaunt HE'S ego Well done. By the way, did I ever tell you that you are mentioned in my poem POETRY HEAVEN?

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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