Monday, June 11, 2007

Ducks In The Sunset Comments

Rating: 3.9

They stood beside the water
Their little bodies' dark this night
A backdropp of brilliant sunset
It was a glorious precious sight
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Marilyn Lott
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Ernestine Northover 12 June 2007

A delightfully painted picture here Marilyn, I love ducks and I can so imagine this scene. Sunset warms up everything with its glorious glow. Lovely write. Love Ernestine XXX

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Raul Castelan 11 June 2007

MAGNIFICENT WORK! ! ! I love ducks very much. This poem brought me back to when I went to go live in Pittsburgh because I used to go feed ducks often. They where fun to be with. You really caught the view here. Take care and God bless.

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Marilyn Lott

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