Dune Snake Poem by C. Michael Miller

Dune Snake

Rating: 5.0


She is a like cinnamon-scented dune beneath me.
Moonlight caresses her with mysterious shadows that
hold euphoric promise... her warm scent
creating nocturnal desires.

She is like a sidewinder sliding
across the desert mosaic...
a sensuous dance, shifting and churning,
constantly moving... challenging...

I dance with her now... her venom coursing
through me... entranced.
I reach out for the scent and comfort of her
warm dune, moving through her shadows...
getting lost in them... hoping never to be found.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malgorzata Mika 12 September 2007

Wahnt a vivid, fluently-written describtion of a woman! The use of imaginary and soothing similies is the core of this poem. They create a charming atmosphere of peace, beauty and desire that hide a dormant element that is about to burts...

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Charles Chaim Wax 09 November 2005

a rich compelling vivid use of words right there in the scent of her soul a really fine poem

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