Dusk Comes Dancing Comments
Clear and lucid the light
Of soft summer nights.
Gentle late breezes, right
On time float clouds, and bright
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You have successfully captured the blue magic of the dusk., Beautiful write,10, for you. Love, Sandra
The twilight hour a time to ponder gaze to the west where it lingers longer ionized air, a palate'd night Sheppard's watch with delight the glorious colours of dusk, beautifully portrayed Fay
Another wonderful piece so elloquently painted by your hand Fay....beautiful....Fi 10++++
You use a fine pallet of light and color to explore this time of mystery and soft summer evenings. Your rhyming is unconventional and all the more enjoyable for that. A poem that is definitely recognizable as Fay Slimm's - and that's the truth. Bravo. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
fay its a beauty good old simple straight poetry...laid back and cheerful great cheers
Because i look to the east, i see only the dawn! but have seen through your eyes the dusk! i can see the setting sun in my imagination beautiful!
a dailt sight though every day a new show..lovely your poem inspires
Beautiful word flow that captures the the ambience of dusk very well...10
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12/26/2025 2:15:06 PM # 1.0.0
Some superb language at play in this colourful little poem. I love all the 'ooh' sounds - it conjures a feeling of all those wide eyes looking up at a firework display. S :)