Dutiful & Compassionate Mother Earth Poem by Santosh Sharma

Dutiful & Compassionate Mother Earth

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Dutiful & Compassionate – Mother Earth

Beautiful Beyond description
Decorated with millions of jewels
sprawling, ever young
The mother earth.

Spinning around axis
Given day to work and Night to rest
Tirelessly you are working
Without any relief and respite.

Clasping the children, Taking us around
Some times near, some times far from Sun
Luring us with beautiful seasons
Not the children feel stale

Dutiful without fail
Compassionate beyond doubt
It is you, make us celebrate
Festivals, birthdays, new year. And christmas

Completing the journey precision to seconds
following the path as ordained by God
Oh Mother Earth.Bless we children, could become
, Dutiful, lovable, and compassionate like you
With out divulging the path.



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malaya Roses 10 January 2011

Learn from the best to be a human with compassion. That's the solid conclusion on the poem's central idea. Flawless narration on earth and comparative idea on human's character & acts giving this poem a natural feeling. It was good and I glad after read it. Excellent.

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Jenny Gordon 07 January 2011

It is a beautiful, sweet tribute to the devilish lie of 'mother earth.' Whereas the Bible says God gives us all rain from heaven and fruitful seasons, filling our hearts with food and gladness, and that all is from His hand and all obeys Him. While He did form man from the dust of the earth, He never refers to the earth as a mother. I hope you are not terribly offended by my saying so. It is, again, a very sweet tribute, but alas, misdirected.

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Leela Devi 06 January 2011

you give your pen a nice poetic touch

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Pranab K Chakraborty 03 January 2011

Well written love addressing our planet. Composed well. Write more and live long. Regards, pranab

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