Empty Nest Poem by Santosh Sharma

symbolical. all old parents experience it.10, shan

Very Nice Imagery Santosh! I enjoyed reading this very much!

I liked the way you depicted the whole situation. The poem is extremely rich in imagery. Nice write.

Very beautiful imagery, you depict the circle of life so vividly. I really enjoy this poem. Nice written 10

A beautiful depiction of the cycle of life of our feathered friend. Enjoy the visit with them and really enjoyed the flow of the poem. If time permits maybe you could read my 'The Empty Nest'. I used the squirrel for my write. I give you a ten Santosh and keep up the good work.

Exactly expressed my feelings.

Nested sequences of life old, young and the cycle continues....Life is not permanent though the nest is unless is destroyed.Nests get transferred or tresspassed or tessellated or masqueraded but every nest has some stories behind to tell..A very experienced hand in contemporary poetry

Nest, once glamorous, full of life becomes lifeless and dumb.What a tragedy! Why should the children discard their parents when once they become independent.All children should read this poem and make home free from silence and spread the blanket of happiness and gay everywhere.

very nicely written intricate account with dual meaning perhaps with respect to the writers own life experience

What an excellent and well crafted write! Very poignant and thought provoking poem! 10+++ Keep it up! You got what it takes to inspire the whole world, talent! Thanks for sharing! ...