Empty Nest

Rating: 4.1
Sweat in summer,
Shivered in the winter
Bruised the feathers, endured the pain
Flown to miles to collect the straws

Built a nest
Admired a beautiful life
With chirp of birds
Cacophony all around

Opened their eyes
Embracing close to my heart
Put the grains, opening their mouth
Protected, clasping inside the wings
Taught how to fly and brave the sky

All have grown
Flying with their own wings
Elder had flown, followed the young
Occasional was the appearance
Those days are also over

Now aged is will
No strength in wings
Empty is nest
Silence is all around.
Tuesday, January 18, 2011
Sunita Pardikar 07 January 2018
Exactly expressed my feelings.
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Allemagne Roßmann 29 August 2011
Nested sequences of life old, young and the cycle continues....Life is not permanent though the nest is unless is destroyed.Nests get transferred or tresspassed or tessellated or masqueraded but every nest has some stories behind to tell..A very experienced hand in contemporary poetry
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Rekha Mandagere 01 August 2011
Nest, once glamorous, full of life becomes lifeless and dumb.What a tragedy! Why should the children discard their parents when once they become independent.All children should read this poem and make home free from silence and spread the blanket of happiness and gay everywhere.
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lost soul 03 May 2011
very nicely written intricate account with dual meaning perhaps with respect to the writers own life experience
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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2011
What an excellent and well crafted write! Very poignant and thought provoking poem! 10+++ Keep it up! You got what it takes to inspire the whole world, talent! Thanks for sharing! ...
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Why does the nest get empty? Why do have to become old Why tell me why! Sad but significant. It is the rugged reality of living! Well done my friend.10/10
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Amy Marie 30 January 2011
I like the end :) It was catchy.
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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 January 2011
slice of life with great remembrance!
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Hans Vr 29 January 2011
Good poem, Santosh. Poetic reminder to all of us to keep honouring our beloved parents. Let's all give a call to our mother or father at this moment. Well done.
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Ata Ata 27 January 2011
nice to read, well penned the circle of life, great work, well done, thanks for sharing
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