'E# Of My Heart' Poem by Utsav Patel

'E# Of My Heart'

Rating: 4.9


A song in your sacred veins...
Lyrics in your sapphire eyes...
Tune in your windy hairs...
Beat in your tiny heart...
Rhythm on your juicy lips...
You're E# of my heart...

Tapping on your nose..
Plucking on your chicks...
Acoustic sound of your throat...
Metal sound of my heart...
Featuring together...
Rhythm of divine..
You're E# of my heart...

Pain of separation..
Breakdown in depression...
Burden of existence...
Thousands of prescriptions...
Anguish of awareness...
Promises in thickness...
Heart has been deny...
Still you can fly...
You're E# of my heart...

You deserve the best...
I ain't the best...
That's why you're E# of my heart...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to someone very special...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vijay Sai R 31 December 2012

very nice to read all throughout

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Payal Parande 31 December 2012

how lovely....a special poem for some one special and pretty sure you made that person feel special...beautiful job sir

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Lucinda Nightsilver 18 November 2013

it's beautiful but sad.... very good

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Kishor Pathak 04 January 2013

Written from core...Nice composition could have been better with rhymes...

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Luscious Larry 03 January 2013

There is no E#. It's called F. I see the guitar so this must be intended. The person means nothing to you then? Or you mean nothing to her/him? Interesting!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 January 2013

Nice dedication to your special -some one.! The flow of the poem is musical.Hope that someone enjoyed it.

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Sossi Khachadourian 01 January 2013

I liked it, very well done!

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Utsav Patel

Utsav Patel

Surat, Gujarat, India
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