Saturday, June 20, 2009

Ebb-Tide Dreaming. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shore-line calls tonight, and I oblige.
Shoes in hand, I stride drained sands
And follow ebbing tide.
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Fay Slimm
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fayy this is beautiful . i have not been to the beach in over 10 years and you brought me there. really nice.

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fay ythi sis beautiful. i have not been ot the beach in over 10 years and you brought me there. really nice.

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Herbert Nehrlich2 21 June 2009

A beautiful poem indeed. Nothing like the ambience and magic of the seaside, you have painted in vivid colours. Hxx

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Bob Gibson 20 June 2009

That magical time of the suns dying flight before the twilight and the night footprints left on a sandy shore erased as those who walked before but not the memories! Fay beautiful poem!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

'Night sky darkens, stillness fills the quiet air, I know somewhere he gazes At the same star, sharing.' An excellent composition. Beautiful 10+++

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Sandra Martyres 20 June 2009

A beautiful piece Fay evoking lovely memories...10

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Sandra Fowler 20 June 2009

Exquisite, Fay.Love knows no barriers of time or distance. 10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

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Tsira Goge 20 June 2009

Beautiful there is your dreaming, Fay 10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Fiona Davidson 20 June 2009

Beautiful piece Fay...lovely thought that the one you love may be looking at the stars and moon at the same moment you are...Fi 10++++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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