Echoes Poem by Philip Williams

Echoes

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The vows of their silence, echoes
As a screaming hum of nothing
Through the muffled white washed walls
Of a convent wall, of religious housing
Seeming deaf, to the silence of its years
Hearing only, its consistent voice of silence, screaming
From the inside of its muffled incommunicado
They seek an audience, other than their own dreaming
Tongue tied, and mute deaf, to the tears of their sounds
Listening, hearing deep within themselves, mental screams of inability
But silenced by the shadow of the vow, a tongue tied religious dream
Silence echoes, sleeping, whimpering in its own human born fragility

Tuesday, November 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Jayaraman 17 November 2015

Silenced by the Vow.. awesome write... each line so deep and meaningful..As a screaming hum of nothing Through the muffled white washed walls best lines I liked, am adding this one to my favorite list to re-read later.. thanks for sharing.

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Philip Williams 17 November 2015

Thankyou for your sincere words

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2015

Vows of silence are scribbling in this sharing with interesting view. Fantastic sharing...10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

A wonderful poem pin pointing the orthodoxy and it's limitations in religious matters with great skill. A thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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