Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Echoes Comments

Rating: 5.0

The vows of their silence, echoes
As a screaming hum of nothing
Through the muffled white washed walls
Of a convent wall, of religious housing
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Philip Williams
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Seema Jayaraman 17 November 2015

Silenced by the Vow.. awesome write... each line so deep and meaningful..As a screaming hum of nothing Through the muffled white washed walls best lines I liked, am adding this one to my favorite list to re-read later.. thanks for sharing.

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Philip Williams 17 November 2015

Thankyou for your sincere words

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2015

Vows of silence are scribbling in this sharing with interesting view. Fantastic sharing...10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

A wonderful poem pin pointing the orthodoxy and it's limitations in religious matters with great skill. A thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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