Yasmeen Khan

Bronze Star - 2,226 Points (Islamabad)

Ecstasy - Poem by Yasmeen Khan


Vivid blue, emerald green,
Gold n brown
In mysterious sheen
Dance in ecstasy
To a soundless symphony

Fascinating feathers
With lithe grace
In all their splendor
Furl in elation
That wondrous creation

Magnificently rocks
His exquisite trail
Dances the peacock
And along with him
The whole universe!

Topic(s) of this poem: nature love

Form: Ballad

Comments about Ecstasy by Yasmeen Khan

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/12/2015 6:37:00 AM)

    Great imagery of a peacock dance....... (Report) Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (5/8/2013 7:15:00 AM)

    Multihued representation of human thoughts in the peacock Dance episodes.Good and bold thoughts combined. (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    lot of movement that makes one move with the peacock! (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (1/13/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    great metaphor....enjoyed the oblique reference to present scenario...lovely
    not a word yet the whole story...impressive

    context well delivered....
    Mystical shades
    Basked in love
    Spirit in elation

    content too, easy to the tongue and mind
    (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (1/13/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Whirls and whirls dance the peacock and along with him the whole universe. very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (1/13/2013 9:18:00 AM)

    This is a wondefully beautiful poem
    I really enjoyed it
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 29, 2017

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