Eerie Calm Poem by Yasmin Khan

Eerie Calm

Rating: 5.0


Eerie calm melts and diffuse
Words linger in misty evening
Smiles break in queer rings
Whispers grow intense
Like a swan’s cry
On the river at a pitch dark
Midsummer night
Shadows stir in haze
And atmosphere rings
With deep growing silence
As a hundred swans splash
On water fluttering their wings
Breaking waves in many circlets
Feelings grow in the rhythm of gentle ripples
Concentric circles round one point
Growing, breaking in an unending cycle.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 June 2013

Feelings grow in... gentle ripples. Thank you for the nice image.

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David Wood 17 June 2013

Many deep and true feeling expressed here. A lovely write Jasmeen.

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Valsa George 18 June 2013

Silence giving way to meaningful sounds and feelings swelling for utterance! Beautiful images Jasmeen! I see a hundred swans splashing, fluttering their wings! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

Eerie Calm by Jasmeen Khan is a coherent poem head to toe word by word arranged very calm

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Vipins Puthooran 21 June 2013

styllish vocab- -a good poem! ! !

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Farah Ilyas 18 June 2013

To look swans, fluttering their wings in water, splashing of water made by swan, intense silence, misty evening...wao am still in imagination, a perfect poem to be read as well enjoyed & read again & again over time

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 18 June 2013

Lovely words and they are put together very interestingly.

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Wahab Abdul 18 June 2013

this is a piece of wonderful image creation... love it much...

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