Efforts Unrewarded 0846 Current Version Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Efforts Unrewarded 0846 Current Version



Time mocks priorities as, day by day,
efforts, unrewarded, dream vain show.
Existence: an incessant ebb and flow.
effects link subtle causal interplay
none may control. Coincidence at play
enacts a dance whose pattern steps few know.
Some keys, decoded, avoid stop and go,
channel energy to colour grey.
Harmony and Chance Time's tides obey,
music invent, according string to bow,
instinctively enjoying vertigo
unknown to most, who coast with bubble bray
turned to empty echo drowned unheard.
Late offers elegy for early bird.

(7 March 2009)

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Initial version of this sonnet entitled Some Find written 28 June 1997 revised 7 March 2009. See also Bubble Bray - 0822 as a variant

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