Eight Second Ride Poem by Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Eight Second Ride

Rating: 5.0


I watched an old man
climb up a tall dead tree.
With huge Y shaped branches
that spread out from the tree.
A chain saw hung from his belt,
with all the rope he'd need.
A dirty old cap
made him a sight to see.
A spotter on the ground
looked on with a careful eye.
A fall from such a height
could mean the old man might die.
He roped off one end
where the Y became a V
Then fired up his saw
as he stood alongside the tree.
The ladder shook
with every move he made.
The chain saw buzzed
as the chain spun around the blade.
A sharp crack sounded
as the first notch was made.
The second back-cut brought the crash
as the branch fell away.
I heard the old man yell,
'that's an eight second ride, '
as the branch fell to earth.
He looked relieved and let out a sigh.
It was something to do
on this warm summer day.
Watch an old man at work
and how he earned his pay.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My neighbor had a tree cut down today and it was hard to believe that the old man cutting it down was 65 years old.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 16 August 2021

Wow, very good! I truly enjoyed this one; one of the best you've written! ! !

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Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Baltimore, Maryland
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