Us ki tehni se latka howa
Akhree pata
Jis ki nokon pe thee
Khazan ki rung raliain
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Very beautiful poem here, about cycles of life, a nice ending! 10
nice work Sadiq...it reminded me O Henry's famous short story- The Last Leaf... liked the soft sober melancholy inside this write...sweetly poetic...10
A very beautiful write....touching....melancholic... I have a great time reading this twice and will read this again... thanks for translating this, you have given me the opportunity to understand it and know some urdu words, and read an URDU poetry at the same time... thanks and hope to read more translations I remember The Last leaf....an inspiration to go on living.....seeing the last leaf that still clings to the bough...not knowing it was just an artificial leaf... I love this poem of yours.....very inspiring...my fave 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia