Electric Poem by Paul Moosberg

Electric

Rating: 5.0


It’s jumping off of matter
To be as it will miss
It’s shifting through pattern
To yield its time to bliss
It’s scratching off the bother
Of days that don’t exist
It’s breaking through the water
Of this electric kiss

Breaking scratches shifting through
A jumping fabric sea

Kiss exists in blissfulness
Missed motions are to be

Water bothers patterned math
For mattered ways to flee

Electric time’s will won’t shine
Why spark reality

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will Barber 12 July 2006

I truly admire this poem. You've succeeded in describing a kiss through a metaphor of quantum theory. I've never seen THAT done before! Just a terrific write.

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