Electronic Pain Poem by Green Peace

Electronic Pain

Rating: 4.5


Days in childhood, in vacations
we spent at giggle laughter
Discussed the pickles
Found the solutions
Climbed the trees
Scribbled, scratched, drew
Now everything electrified
No use of pencils
On the computers they draw and paint
Games on it too or else
The video games
Where are the fluffy dolls?
Showcased, shopped, bracketed
No smiles, no laughter
Pip---Pip, Pip-----Pip, Swish-----Swash
As if every thing's melted
And they became history
Reminiscence them only to reap its joy
And be satiated
That we didn't lose anything
As the new borns are today.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I really like the concept in this poem. It's so true! Unfortunatly I'm one of those kids and I wish that I could detatch myself from electronics, but I can't. Nice poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 June 2009

'As if every thing's melted And they became history Reminiscence them only to reap its joy And be satiated That we didn't lose anything As the new borns are today.' Content of this poem is modern. Last few lines are amazing. As the time flies we are really entering into the zone of electronic pain! Love this poem with 10++

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