A New Wonderland Poem by Green Peace

A New Wonderland

Rating: 5.0

No more mosquito sucks or dog bites
Fear of the approaching leopard that tears the flesh
Or any threat of a dense forest or cathedral
Want to remain undisturbed, silent
In a new, happy world
Remain untouched by a rose or thorn
Immune from ecstasy or mourn
Don't wish any warnings, restrictions, bondage-
No anger, nor rage
Drank water was glared
Loved art but was censured
In hunger was bit, scratched, whipped
Extracted all labour, pittance
Tried to emulate, envying always
Looked forward
Making to look down dustbin disdainfully
And left to die as fern leaves.

Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

'Making to look down dustbin disdainfully And left to die as fern leaves.' Nice, very nice poem. 10+

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 October 2008

compact composition with fine words........10+

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Kesav Easwaran 12 October 2008

Strong powerful lines pouring poetic frustrations...a good artful write...painting extremities of life...and still wanting to keep away from all of them...ten for you G...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 October 2008

Very powerful expression indeed. But I felt last three or four lines could have been made more explicit.......10

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 13 October 2008

a dreamest poem of world buut

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 June 2009

Beautiful thoughtful poem.10+++

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 May 2009

Life bristles with all this hazards and hardships.We cannot be just disdained this way with a mind reluctant to withstand this woe of the evil.They are not for long but they are always.We are thinking of them all the time and therefore it is hurting us.We have to confine ourselves in our own world where only we can explore solace.Hope you will get such an elixir for life.Thanks.Ray Amito...10..

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Eyan Desir 25 May 2009

Interesting write Well done

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Chitra - 24 May 2009

the paradise of solace that we all seek...well put..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 May 2009

Remain untouched by a rose or thorn Immune from ecstasy or mourn........... .. yet no riff or reeks by life across stream soul seems to be free from all by redemption............wonderful philosophy of life that leads to redemption of soul, and ultimate is the salvation, making no distinction happiness and sorrow, love and hate, etc,10++, thanks for sharing

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