Green Peace


A New Wonderland - Poem by Green Peace

No more mosquito sucks or dog bites
Fear of the approaching leopard that tears the flesh
Or any threat of a dense forest or cathedral
Want to remain undisturbed, silent
In a new, happy world
Remain untouched by a rose or thorn
Immune from ecstasy or mourn
Don't wish any warnings, restrictions, bondage-
No anger, nor rage
Drank water was glared
Loved art but was censured
In hunger was bit, scratched, whipped
Extracted all labour, pittance
Tried to emulate, envying always
Looked forward
Making to look down dustbin disdainfully
And left to die as fern leaves.


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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (6/28/2009 12:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful thoughtful poem.10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (5/25/2009 9:31:00 AM)

    Life bristles with all this hazards and hardships.We cannot be just disdained this way with a mind reluctant to withstand this woe of the evil.They are not for long but they are always.We are thinking of them all the time and therefore it is hurting us.We have to confine ourselves in our own world where only we can explore solace.Hope you will get such an elixir for life.Thanks.Ray Amito...10.. (Report)Reply

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  • Eyan Desir (5/25/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    Interesting write
    Well done
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  • Chitra - (5/24/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    the paradise of solace that we all seek...well put.. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (5/24/2009 2:59:00 PM)

    Remain untouched by a rose or thorn
    Immune from ecstasy or mourn...........
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    yet no riff or reeks by life across stream
    soul seems to be free from all by redemption............wonderful philosophy of life that leads to redemption of soul, and ultimate is the salvation, making no distinction happiness and sorrow, love and hate, etc,10++, thanks for sharing
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  • Jasjiv Singh (12/9/2008 12:31:00 AM)

    whoa! are you describing heaven here? (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/27/2008 7:43:00 AM)

    thought provoking........well penned (Report)Reply

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  • Mehmet YILMAZLAR (10/13/2008 11:33:00 AM)

    a dreamest poem of world buut (Report)Reply

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/12/2008 11:09:00 AM)

    Very powerful expression indeed. But I felt last three or four lines could have been made more explicit.......10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (10/12/2008 6:44:00 AM)

    Strong powerful lines pouring poetic frustrations...a good artful write...painting extremities of life...and still wanting to keep away from all of them...ten for you G... (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/10/2008 1:48:00 PM)

    compact composition with fine words........10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/8/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    'Making to look down dustbin disdainfully
    And left to die as fern leaves.'

    Nice, very nice poem.
    10+
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 5, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 13, 2012


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