Elegant Style Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Elegant Style

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Women are assertive when they talk
With elegant style and walk
If you really dream of ideal woman
You can hardly believe them as strong as man

Yes they have come in to being
Neither as powerful queen of king
Nor as female performer in circus ring
But dedicated female character being

We have confined her role in customary way
She has left it far behind with decisive say
Where are they not seen today?
Almost everywhere for attention to pay

She fits every where in dominating position
In home she has formidable composition
No one can do away without her presence
Home will be reduced to rubble in her absence

In sky they have ruled and on land too
On technology and other fields they have pierced through,
In some of the best economy of world
Many areas have come under their fold

Despite all this, her role has never diminished
The influence is day by day increased but not finished
Even though they may lie low in all the spheres
They have found the way to excel everywhere

Let us make room for them to shine
They can not be neglected or put on side line
They have come into being for playing role
They are capable of responding to any call

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2012

Women are assertive when they talk With elegant style and walk If you really dream of ideal woman You can hardly believe them as strong as man

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2012

Seen by 17 Sharif Jhurry, Elizabeth Waterhouse and Sukmawati Komala like this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2012

Elizabeth Squires an exceptional poem my friend. Thanks for sharing. Sunday at 4: 28pm · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2012

Feminists may disagree because they believe in gender equality! But your views are time tested UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala Nov 19,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2012

------------------ Kudos to you, Hasmukhji, for the absolutely right sentiment expressed in this poem. Malsawmi Jacob, Mumbai Nov 19,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2012

Thank you Mehtaji, for recognizing and complimenting the virtues of women and this Ode to them! Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India Nov 19,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2012

Seen by 10 Lela Northcross Wakely and Steven Glenn like this.

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