Linda Ori

Rookie - 169 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

* Elusive * - Poem by Linda Ori

As the butterfly
You kiss my brow
Then softly fly

As the summer breeze
You touch my face
And gently tease
A smile;

As a fleeting dream
You fill my thoughts
Then quickly seem
To fade;

As the love I crave
To warm my heart
For all I gave
To you;

Partly given soul
Though beautiful
Ne'er quite whole
Or true;

Was our time to be
You could not pledge
Your love to me -



Comments about * Elusive * by Linda Ori

  • (4/2/2008 3:27:00 AM)

    Linda, you captured elusivity perfectly. Enjoyed this write. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

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  • (4/2/2008 2:09:00 AM)

    This is beautiful Linda...very well done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

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