Monday, December 14, 2009

Emotional Discourse..... Comments

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pain hurt and buried me to the ground, the
scatter hope of my dream birth the beginning
of my tomb; the hyperbole of waiting to the
endless touch and passion of my longing
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Antonio Liao
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Kranthi Pothineni 14 December 2009

Your lines had made me feel to each word of it, which I can easily relate to. Great flow and rich craft.

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Ric Bastasa 14 December 2009

as usual, the poem says a lot. i am amazed by the evolution of your thoughts. continue writing my friend, the world of literature needs you.

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Antonio Liao

Antonio Liao

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