Sunday, January 5, 2020

Emptiness Comments

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It sat, its feet
Firm, grounded to the earth;
but heart scooped out-
Hollow; chunks of hollowness
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Feneena S Mohamed
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Chinedu Dike 19 January 2020

Really a poignant bit of verse written in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Feneena.

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Lyn Paul 19 January 2020

Excellent poem Feneena. Also what an amazing statue that holds a huge story with a beautiful view too. Thank You

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 January 2020

Pain and sorrow! ! Memories! Life's journey, Lost love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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