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Ahtivah Lawton

Brooklyn, New York

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Brooklyn, New York

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(this is suppose to be a Haiku, and i had many version of this but i guess this is the best!)

EMPTY, is all i see
Crack pipes is her destiny
and forever thats me!

Ahtivah Lawton

Friday, June 19, 2009

poem poems haiku destiny empty forever

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2009

i see it not hoolow or empty but with full of wisdom....10

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Rachel Martin 02 July 2009

very short, but filled with enlarged strong words! great job!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 June 2009

The emptiness of inside is well narrated and it is indeed a mind state when one sees no path lit up with glory yet one has to continue to recoup oneself for the continual efforts for dealing with life.....

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Dani Moore 19 June 2009

it is short but very well writen well done

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