Empty, Ambiguous....3 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO
Empty, Ambiguous....3
spin docters with medieval dogma,
Antiquated answers from a babylonia
fool, words that melt just like ice cream,
and a funny moment filled with deceat
and love, close your eyes and blow
out the candles, then open your eyes
to a big fat moon..
AWESOME 'SPIN', DOCTOR...IM BEGINNING TO READ YOUR WORX A 2ND TIME, AS, YOUCAN BE A WEE BIT ABRASIVE TO A READERS SLEEPY MIND....TIME TO WAKE UP & ENJOY THE GOOD WORK YOU PRODUCE! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
Sometimes I think you are too far 'above me' intellectually for me to truly understand some of your work. The images I get with the 'closed eyes opening to a big fat moon' are probably not what you are meaning? ? So, since I am truly a fan of your work I will leave the helpful comments to more qualified people here. I will say I enjoy reading your work. Sincerely, Mary
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4/25/2024 2:09:30 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a doctor should be the last person in the world who should be a fool...too many lives depend on them...may never see a moon at all...that was nice to read...nalini