The moon that shines so bright ahead
The moonlight that my soul and heart it fed
Today it numbs my heart
Today it splits me apart
For what had I suffered eternally
For who did I suffer so determinedly
Was my soul that you struck first
Or was it my heart that you first burst
Was it even me that you came to see
Or was I just my treasure's key
Did you even notice my love
Did you even look at what you got rid of
Was I the fool for believing in you
Was I the fool for thinking that love is true
If then the punishment is just and apt
This broken heart is forever chapped
For I am, was a kind man
But now just an empty, hollow tin can
But know this, forever this heart shall remember
That hateful and revolting December
~Hikaru(par timer)
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The moon that shines so bright ahead The moonlight that my soul and heart it fed Today it numbs my heart Today it splits me apart... very symbolic expressions of a breaking up... relationships. love, lack of trust, breach of trust..... pain, suffering, feelings of betrayal....... so many thoughts came up in my mind as i read your poem. thank you very much dear poet. tony
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I would like to translate this poem
Was I the fool for believing in you Was I the fool for thinking that love is true If then the punishment is just and apt This broken heart is forever chapped....love, relationships, faithfulness, misunderstandings, separation leaving inner wounds that will remain a lifelong...........you have written down all these points my dear poet...... thank you very much for this beautiful and thought provoking poem. tony