Empty World Poem by Chaminda Pushpadewa

Empty World



Sun has gone down Therefore, Desolate and loneliness thoughts were entering the heart
I was footstep to the seashore
Automatically wind hit against me and wind blow away from me
Hence, sea waves were high tide since that evening

Many of ships and boats were voyaging upon the sea
But I didn't see anything as well as I felt empty spaces on there
The Seahawk and pigeons were flying at the sky that was close to the sea
But I felt the sky was empty as a large white cloud

The boat on the seashore and I get into the boat and sit there a few seconds
again, I looked up the sea after that, walking was few metros
Viewing that was an island
Alas, I felt the sea has not single there was established an island

Hurting that was my heart but which is not chest pain
It does not reduce after seen that birds, sea wave as well as an island
Starting walking back to my place, therefore, I turned my back to the sea
Mus, mus the blown wind has wrapped all over the body but the desolate thought has not away from me

Sunday, November 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 17 November 2018

Love the title, it can be at times a very empty world with loneliness and heartache a void that is difficult to fill. The imagery is very atmospheric!

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