Emptyness Poem by chantelle price

Emptyness

Rating: 4.3


Here I am on the floor
left for the died
my pride is replaced
with the feeling shame,
shamed of failing them,
shamed of my own self,
shamed of doing things
unspoken of to the living,
this shame has now
left me feeling empty,
empty like I had no
soul to begin with,
Emptyness is all thats left.

Sunday, September 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: deep
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 October 2015

A good depiction of the deplorable condition of life at very low ebb, well articulated and nicely encapsulated. A lovely piece of poetry bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing Chantelle. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 21 September 2015

Emptiness.. a feeling experienced by many in their life (and not once only..)

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Kelly Kurt 20 September 2015

that emptiness strikes us all at one time. Head up Peace

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