chantelle price

Rookie - 27 Points (25/10/2000 / King Edward Hospital Subiaco)

Emptyness - Poem by chantelle price

Here I am on the floor
left for the died
my pride is replaced
with the feeling shame,
shamed of failing them,
shamed of my own self,
shamed of doing things
unspoken of to the living,
this shame has now
left me feeling empty,
empty like I had no
soul to begin with,
Emptyness is all thats left.

Topic(s) of this poem: deep

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Emptyness by chantelle price

  • Chinedu Dike (10/12/2015 6:43:00 PM)


    A good depiction of the deplorable condition of life at very low ebb, well articulated and nicely encapsulated. A lovely piece of poetry bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing Chantelle. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/21/2015 6:45:00 AM)


    Emptiness.. a feeling experienced by many in their life (and not once only..) (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/20/2015 11:45:00 PM)


    that emptiness strikes us all at one time.
    Head up
    Peace
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2015



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