Ben mcelfresh

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End It All - Poem by Ben mcelfresh

Depression taking over
After being dormant.
I don't like what i'm feeling
I liked being happy.

But now it seems thats over
Time for tears once again.
Blood stains on the bed
Razors back on the desk.

The pain was absent
But now you've made it come back.
It obvious you don't care
Guess what...You never did!

Don't try to lie
it won't work.
I know the truth
I can see it through all the pain.

Blood stains my eyes
Seeing everything with a red tint.
Nothing makes sense anymore
Not my life, not my soul, NOTHING!

Tonight I think I'll take my life
Tonight I think I'll end it all.
What do you think,
Is it worth it all to end it all?


Comments about End It All by Ben mcelfresh

  • (2/20/2007 2:20:00 PM)


    god cares about you i feel were your coming from......nice poem you expressed it very well (Report) Reply

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  • (2/15/2007 1:35:00 PM)


    Depresion stops you from doing the things yo want to do
    It takes the energy away
    Also changes who you are
    When you have depresion you are not the same person
    You become more angry and out of control
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 15, 2011


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