Ghina Albiek

Rookie - 178 Points (8/6/1996 / Damascus)

Ending This Love - Poem by Ghina Albiek

There was a sparkling in my eyes when i met you
But now all i can see is the color blue
I'm sitting here missing something true
Missing someone i once knew

I saw something high
And thought it was the sky
But when i said goodbye
Discovered this everlasting blue is a lie

Just the way i believe seasons are four
I do believe it's you whom i adore
And parting from you is what i abhor
O love is the only thing we can't ignore

I'm in love yes i can see
But your love seems like a sea
Let's not sit down and drink some tea
Let's go search for the reality

My soul is calling can't you hear
I guess you promised you'll be near
But all i can feel is the power of fear
And a sweet pain that made me bleed for a year

Now that death is coming closer
And my empty heart is growing older
Sorrow is becoming much more stronger
And my love for you is about to be over...


Comments about Ending This Love by Ghina Albiek

  • Aranthabailu Ummar (7/31/2015 3:31:00 PM)


    Is it not foolish to have a love of true
    it lies many things & ignores many more
    as it real happening many sort in life
    like it too.
    give up all to Allah & make passion with him
    you may have a beautiful life here & ever

    Ĺive a life stiĺl it makes you
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  • Unwritten Soul (8/25/2012 12:14:00 PM)


    You finishing each line very delicately, the rhyme so nice and perfectly done complete with the exact emotion as it supposed to be inside the poem...this is a fine textured poem Ghina! even it sad but i am happy reading great poem...but the sad mix the feelings :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Sossi Khachadourian (7/2/2012 5:38:00 AM)


    Very deep and so sad poem but the melody of the real love that comes from the heart is so clear that I can feel it here and it gave a nice taste to this poem. I like it it wish you all the best! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 18, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, May 18, 2012


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