Ghina Albiek

Rookie - 178 Points (8/6/1996 / Damascus)

Goodbyes - Poem by Ghina Albiek

hate goodbyes,
but they say everything has an end
i don't believe but i did cry
cause i couldn't even say goodbye

the worst was the last moment
pretending not to notice you
the worst was the last look
it was silent even our eyes couldn't speak

didn't know it was the last look ever
couldn't believe i ruined everything again
but thoughts of you won't leave my mind
they will remain till the very end

and since i don't believe in ends
then they will remain till ever
it's something i believe in
and use it in ever poem i write

i'm telling you now
it's not goodbye
i'll see you again
in a place where only angels are around
hope you'll remmember me then.


Comments about Goodbyes by Ghina Albiek

  • (12/30/2011 6:40:00 AM)


    I really enjoyed reading this poem, You did very well! The truth is chur also right, goodbye's are hard. Sometimes it feels like the worst word in the world, by far the hardest one to say. :) , keep up the good work (Report) Reply

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  • Arfa Iris (10/16/2011 10:42:00 AM)


    its really fabulous............... its really hard to say goodbye...........

    its like tearing away a part from ur heart vey forcefully..............
    well written dear...........
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 10, 2011


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