I dared to dream of you
In my darkest hour
In my time of self doubt and pain
I dared to dream of you
I dared to dream of you
Let down my guard
Show you my nakedness
My pride and humiliation
I dared to dream of you
Show you my soul
I took the leap of faith
To be found vulnerable
And now, I'm in suspended animation
Feeling endless ecstasy
You have finally found me
We cannot truly find that 'other' without risking something, exposing ourselves, being prepared to give of ourselves but when we do... we experience such ecstacy. Beautifully captured as ever June, thank you.
truly in love, we let down our mask, share ourselves completely. endless ecstasy, you are a true romantic, June.
Hey congrats to you June.Hopin it gonna last furevar! Nice writes.
I like poems like yours. This one will get me to see your other works. Very well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very well written and expressed poem, June, and I enjoyed reading it quite a bit. It tells a story that just about anyone in love with someone from a distance may have experienced themselves, and does so beautifully. However, that feeling of vulnerability and seeming humiliation must be weighed against the chances of acceptance and your love being recriprocated. It is a risk, to be sure, but one that should not be afraid to be taken. Hopefully, you will indeed find ecstasy! Carl.