Enough Including Jazz Poem by Landrey

Enough Including Jazz



yes, all evening long,
I was watching you.
no, don't get me wrong,
I was working too.
yes, this way and that,
I saw you work late.
no, don't stop and chat,
I saw you. I'll wait.

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Jonzo Bandwagoner 15 February 2007

Yeah, I have *absolutely* no idea what this is about... I like this one! You have a knack for saying what you mean and yet leaving room for more to be said; something I've always struggled with in writing. Great structure, too. It's funny how we both used the word 'jazz' simultaneously in our new poems.

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