Equinox Poem by Marx Lenn Mendoza

Equinox

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The constellation have fallen deep
Craved for thousands creek
21st of March, night and day
An épée locked inside my heart

...envoy with a submering sarcastic inflated balloon

Entr'acte...entrap, decieved in midst
Of night and endow in foolishness

Geum has torn and push me away
...and lightman was a cause of thee
23rd of September disclosed the gleam
Of my illusions...glacé

My pieces have been broken and
Equinoctial rotates...

Unforseen to them!
Unfinished to me!

Monday, January 5, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: sarcastic,september
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i had to google that Equinox, found out it occurs twice a year wn the earth is tilted neither to or from the sun causing the sun to appear vertical from the equator, i liked your use of elaborate phrasing made it an interest to read great poem :)

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Marx Lenn Mendoza

Marx Lenn Mendoza

Manila, Philippines
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