Equinox Poem by Marx Lenn Mendoza

Equinox

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The constellation have fallen deep
Craved for thousands creek
21st of March, night and day
An épée locked inside my heart

...envoy with a submering sarcastic inflated balloon

Entr'acte...entrap, decieved in midst
Of night and endow in foolishness

Geum has torn and push me away
...and lightman was a cause of thee
23rd of September disclosed the gleam
Of my illusions...glacé

My pieces have been broken and
Equinoctial rotates...

Unforseen to them!
Unfinished to me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i had to google that Equinox, found out it occurs twice a year wn the earth is tilted neither to or from the sun causing the sun to appear vertical from the equator, i liked your use of elaborate phrasing made it an interest to read great poem :)

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Marx Lenn Mendoza

Marx Lenn Mendoza

Manila, Philippines
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